Aurrius
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Aurrius Valorum
Somewhere on an island – July the 26th 1323
It was a cold, rainy night, the sky was a clear black, the stars were shining bright, and the wind was blowing, and two figures stood opposite to each other, each on their own cliff, looking at each other with grim expressions on their faces. A flash of lightning lit the landscape; one of the figures was clad in heavy armour, with golden runes on it. The wind was blowing through his long, dark hair, his hand resting on the hilt of his broad sword, waiting for an attack from the adversary. The adversary, a necromancer, dressed in a long, black robe, with a dark red hood covering his face and a dark red cape waving in the wind, and a dark, black mist covering the ground around him.
“What do you want from me!?” The necromancer said, with a grim voice, “You know I’m too powerful for you.”
“Could be. But it’s my duty to battle and attempt to defeat you. For the Light!!” Aurrius Valorum leapt forward, grabbed his shield and slammed his sword – Chrysamere – into the ground, breaking the cliff and both the combatants fell down. Realising he had to do something, Aurrius called upon the power of the Holy Light to slow his fall. Relieved that he wouldn’t fall to death, Aurrius landed in the dried out riverbed below, where the necromancer was already waiting for him, seemingly unharmed.
“Well well, you survived. You’re quite powerful with the Light. You could be the ruler of the world, if your faith was with something else. Shame.” The necromancer whispered. He murmled some words in an ancient language and bolts of dark energy rocketed to Aurrius. He leapt to the side to evade the incoming missiles of shadow, and immediately charged the necromancer after the evasion. Two zombies, summoned by the necromancer, blocked Aurrius’ way and smashed him with their fists. Aurrius quickly recovered from the hits, and killed the zombies with a couple of quick slices from Chrysamere. Again, Aurrius charged the necromancer, but yet again, with no success. The necromancer teleported away just in time, on top of the mountain again. Aurrius quickly teleported after him, and the trap sprung.
Aurrius was swooped in a time portal, taking him to a random century, and a random location. That was Atlas Park, Paragon City, in the year 2006. There, he met the Rikti rebel in the suit, Rikti Mirage V.3. They became friends, and Mirage helped Aurrius Valorum get used to the “modern” times and daily things.
Now, Aurrius fights for righteousness in the 21st century – as a member of the Paragon Knights - protecting the innocent and fighting for justice!!
KNIGHTS UNITE!!
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Please, comment. I would like to hear what I can improve on it!
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| 09/03/06 02:41 |
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Firespray_uk
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Star wars fan?
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| 09/03/06 05:20 |
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Aurrius
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No.. why?
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| 09/03/06 07:45 |
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Firespray_uk
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Valorum was the chancellor of the senate before palpatine took over (ep1) hehe just noticed the name was all hehehe
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| 09/03/06 14:33 |
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Sunshine
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it is descriptive enough that i got a good visual on the action, without being too wordy. It explained enough of the characters without having to go into a long thing.
entertaining, short sweet and to the point. Dig it.
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| 09/03/06 16:50 |
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Aurrius
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| QUOTE | | Valorum was the chancellor of the senate before palpatine took over (ep1) hehe just noticed the name was all hehehe |
Well actually Aurrius and Valorum are both a bit roman based (I like names with -us and stuff), I had absolutely NO idea Valorum was a Star Wars character. Really.
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| 09/04/06 11:18 |
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Hellmeister
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Yo Aurrius, nice story gota get round to teaming some time :)
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| 09/04/06 16:42 |
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Aurrius
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Why thank you all!! =D
EDIT: Please rate the story!! Numbers say a lot! :)
***THIS POST HAS BEEN EDITED***
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